托福独立写作第一段写作模板

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托福独立写作第一段写作模板

第一步就是用简洁明了的句子对原题目的意思进行同义替换;

第二步是提出自己的观点。

这两大步骤细化起来可以概括为四句话：

第一句，采用同义替换的方式对原题目的意思进行更改，当然是“形变神不变”;

第二句，对题目的意思进行解释

第三句，提出自己的观点;

第四句，概括自己所提出观点的理由，引起下文。

下面我具体用一些同学们常犯的毛病题目来解释这个“两大步，四个句子”的具体运用方法。

案例1：误解原意思

Do you agree or disagree： Because people are busy with doing so many things， they can do few things well?

OriginAl：

Some people may hold the view that they are able to do things well even if they are busy with doing so many things simultaneously or during a given period. Although plausible at the first glance， I disagree with the statement. Depending on my own personal experience and personality， I firmly maintain that people can do few things well when they are busy with doing so many things. My arguments of this opinion are listed as follows.

解析：

文章第一句话不是对原题目意思进行解释，而是采用采取了和原意思相反的做法来进行题目诠释;第二句表明自己对误解题目的观点;第三句话对自己的观点进行近一步的解释;第四句一个过渡性的句子。开篇内容安排倒是很好，但是作者犯了误解原题目意思的错误导致后面整个文字都做了无用功。

改后：

When people are engaged in a large extent of work simultaneously， they will not be able to perform all of them perfectly. Just imagine how terrible it will be： too many jobs need to be done by the same person in a given time. Once such a picture appears in my mind， I feel dizzy. To me， it is impossible to do everything well with the limited energy and many others factors efore ， I agree with the statement too many things to be done at the same time cause few to be well done . The reasons are as follow.

Revised：

第一句话对原题目意思进行了很好的诠释;第二、三句话进一步解释原题目;第四句话提出自己的观点;第五句话过渡性句子引起下文。

案例2 ：语言罗嗦，绕弯子给出自己观点，浪费时间

Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

original：

With the development of science and technology， people’s living standard has been improving day by day. According to the family plan， one couple could have only one child. So child becomes the center of the whole family. Some of them are even spoiled. Therefore， I think it is better if the young adult could live independent from their parents as soon as possible.

解析：

这个开头看似没有任何问题，但是仔细分析就会发现很多问题。首先，作者绕了个大弯才给出自己的观点。其次，观点是对原题目的抄写，改动的比较少。最后，开篇缺少引起下文的过渡句。更大的错误是这个开头更像是一个全文主要观点的一个分论点。

Revised：

As we all know， some young adults have the sense of independence in a special period so that they want to choose to live apart from their family， while others still choose to stay with parents in the family. Family can provide young adults a warm bay where he or she could turn to whenever any problems arise. However， considering the sound development of the young adult both mentally and physically， I think to live independently the earlier， the better. Independence is a lesson that each of us must face one day. The detailed reasons are listed below.

解析：

第一句话诠释原题目意思;第二句话进一步解释第一句话;第三句话提出自己的观点;第四句话解释自己的观点，引出下文。

总而言之，文章开头的第一段是整篇文章的主基调，把握好了这个主基调文章自然会光彩夺目，而如果这个部分出现问题整个文章就会黯然失色。大家在以后的写作中运用一下这种“两大步骤，四句话”的托福独立写作方法就一定会有所收获。

托福写作模板到底应该怎么用

在托福写作当中有的同学认为，只要靠考前背几篇模板就万事大吉，这也是一个很大的误区。很多同学由于基础不扎实，除了模板之外需要自己写的部分往往出现很多错误，甚至写出的文字看起来像是一半是抄袭高逼格，一半是低水平自制。

并且，在一些写作辅导中心中，许多老师们倾向于传授学生写作内容，而非写作思路。这种培训模式很可能让学生适得其反。在今年一月份的香港SAT考试中，几名来自同一培训机构学生，因使用了统一的作文模板，结果这几位学生的考试成绩迟迟没有公布。焦急的学生和家长在多次询问后，终于得到了美国大学考试委员会的回复：由于写作内容雷同，几名学生被怀疑考场作弊，成绩待调查结束后再公布，但也有可能取消该次考试成绩。但愿这些学生能最终能涉险过关，但有些学生可能要重新参加考试。一旦再次参加考试，他们的试卷要面临比其他学生更加严格的审核。对于一些学生，由于已经是最后一次考试机会，他们也因此不得不接受放弃美国留学的结局。所以大家要注意，慎用模板。

那么，如何正确使用模板呢?

第一， 强大自己的英语基本功。只有在平时注意积累，注意改正自己的错误，才会避免低级错误，才会运用正确的语法结构。

第二，动笔之前，一定要认真审题，和构思，要尽量明确写作的结构，内容，然后要要注意看写作要求，这一点至关重要。如果没有认真审题的话，见题就写，没有严谨的写作思路，很容易造成跑题，偏题，不符题意的错误，也就不能使模板中的句型和内容相匹配。

第三，我们在初练写作的时候套用模板是正常的事情，也是一个必经的过程，只有先试用别人的东西，才能发现一些漏洞，也才能在此基础上进行自己的写作积累。模板要活学活用，不要一字不差的照抄无误，而是要根据自己所要表达的内容进行更改。写作不一定要字字句句都是难词，长句，而是要学会运用一些常见词的常见短语去表达，这样才能真正显示写作的水平。这就要求学生再平时的学习中注意积累常用的短语或者词组，以备写作之用。另外，关于写作素材，不仅仅指写作常用的词汇，句型或者语法结构，还要包括所用的事例。因此，在平常的练习中要注意从阅读中积累素材，积累词句，而不要仅仅局限于模板之中。

模板只是给了学生一个写作的思路和框架，但是要想获得高分，就要在框架之上填加自己的内容，把模板变成自己的东西，只有文章中有自己的内容，才会吸引判卷老师的眼球!

托福写作必知的一般规则及常识

1.直接引语中，句首字母要大写。例如：“Then，”I said，“You havebeen making a mistake，and the letter is not in the apartment.”“那么，”我说，“你准弄错了。这封信并不在那栋房子里。”

2.星期、月份名称的第一个字母要大写，但季节第一个字母不大写。例如：Sunday星期天，August八月，winter冬天，spring春天。

3.一些大型节日名称的第一个实词的第一字母都要大写。如：Children‘s Day儿童节，National Day国庆节， Teachers’ Day教师节。

4.由普通名词构成的专有名词词组，除其中的冠词、较短的介词和连词外，每个词的第一字母都要大写。例如：the Great Wall长城，the UnitedStates美国。

5.大型会议、文件、条约名称的每个实词(虚词：副词、介词、连词、助词、叹词和拟声词则不用大写)的第一个字母都要大写。书名、报刊名应大写首字母，文章标题中的每一个实词的第一个字母要大写。

如：China Daily《中国日报》，New York Times《纽约时报》，Their Class《他们的班级》(文章标题)，the Warsaw Treaty《华沙条约》， 实例：English Coaching Paper《英语辅导报》。

6.诗歌的每一行的第一个单词的第一个字母要大写。

7. 表示称呼语或职务的词首字母要大写。实例：Mr Green格林先生， Dr Li李博士

托福写作范文：家人经常聚餐是否变得越来越重要?

写作题目

Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Nowadays it is not important for people to have regularly family meals together. 家人经常聚餐变得越来越重要了了，是否认同?

写作范文

In the 21st century, there has been dramatic improvement in diverse aspects of people’s lives. However, people are becoming increasingly busy and sometimes are overwhelmed by endless work or study. As a result, less time is devoted into families and people no longer have meals regularly with family members. In my opinion, this is totally mistaken and it is significant for people to eat with family members regularly despite of the change of time. My reasons are as follows.

To begin with, for parents, having regular meals with children can promote parental relationship. Due to people’s busy daily schedules, parents and children tend to have less conversation nowadays. Children spend most of their time learning in school and playing with peers; adults are occupied with their work and socializing with colleagues. The importance of having family meals is ignored. People forget that time spend at the table can be meaningful. For example, parents can discover the problems that their children struggle with. They can provide guidance or inspire children to find out solution by giving them some nice tips. In this way, children can feel the care and love from parents and parents can know about children’s thoughts. It brings mutual benefits.

In addition, for couples, having regular meals can strengthen partners’ relationship. Common sense tells us that as time goes by, passion between lovers decreases. The lack of communication can also result in marriage problems or even serious crises. By spending some quality time with our beloved companion at meal table we can listen and understand each other better. Ensuring at least one meal with our partners a day shows one’s care and how much we value the other person in spite of the busy schedule. Willing to make time for someone is a great way to demonstrate love.

Lastly, for children, it is of great significance to have regular meals with our aging parents. Young people today are busy with their own work and personal life and they often neglect the feelings of the elders. Some may give money regularly to the elder instead of going home to accompany them because they think financial means is a good way to show their love and care. However, according to a survey conducted by Beijing Normal University, after polling tens of thousands of old people, the top priority of their wishes is expecting their sons and daughters to go home regularly and have regular meals with them. The survey also indicates that the elders who are regularly accompanied by their family members tend to live longer and happier.

All in all, considering the essential role that regular eating with families plays on children, companion and the elder, I insist that it is still of great importance for people to eat with families regularly nowadays.